Sunday, June 12, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Fourteen

Good day all!

Yes, this is SSS Episode 14...Because even though there was no official SSS last week, I still posted. Scroll down to the previous post to read Episode 13.  If you would like to read the entire scene from RESET from the beginning, click HERE.  You'll have to scroll all the way down through the "older posts" to start at Episode One.

And of course, to find out how to participate in this awesome weekly blog hop, visit the new improved Six Sentence Sunday site!  After 9 a.m on Sunday, you can find the list of links to the hundred plus talented writers who have thrown in their Six this week!

Hopefully I'll figure out my new smartphone so I can read and comment on Sunday - otherwise, I will get to reading as many Sixes as I can on Monday - as I procrastinate for work.

And finally, here is the final bit of this scene!  Next week - I change POVs and questions may be answered...Or not!

"I'd better go," she said, still not going.
"Yes." Because I didn't trust myself to linger in her presence any longer, I snatched up my apron and pushed through the door, leaving it swinging to and fro, like an unasked question. 
When I heard the jingle of the bell as the door closed, I collapsed against the wall.
I would not ruin her life.  Again.



  1. Well, that's one way to get her to leave. I want to know what the character did to ruin her life.

  2. Oh, that last line brings up so many questions! Great six!

  3. Did he really ruin her life? Or is he a little self-inflated? ;)

  4. I'm wondering the same thing as Jessica K...Was her life ruined? Truly? I can't wait to read more!

  5. Love how you used the door for the past and present

  6. Oh, wow, I'm all kinds of intrigued!

  7. Ha Ha...Was her life ruined? Depends on how you look at it. And which life you're talking about :) Thanks everyone!

  8. I'm very intrigued. Hope you'll post more this week from this wip.