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Sunday, June 19, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Fifteen

As promised, we are now going inside Lilly Young's head, in a new scene that continues right after her visit to Lewis Hunter's butcher shop.  To read that scene in its entirety, click HERE.

I pulled in front of the hospital, to wait for Nick. Nobody asked me to move the Porsche, even though I had blatantly ignored the NO PARKING signs that decorated the entrance bay. When he appeared, moving swiftly towards the revolving doors, I felt momentarily plunged onto the runway of a fashion show.

Nicholas Blake made scrubs look elegant.

Even under the hospital's harsh lighting that reached out into the dusk, Nick was the picture of tall and handsome, but he wasn't dark. His face - his divine face - appeared starkly pale in the half light, almost ethereal.  
 

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Happy Father's day!

11 comments:

  1. Some guys do make scrubs look good. Nice six!

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  2. Sounds like he had a rough day. Great six!

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  3. Great description, especially about the fashion show runway. Yep, I can think of a few guys who suit the scrubs look. Fab snippet!

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  4. Okay...I wanna meet this guy. lol!

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  5. Ethereal in scrubs, wow, this is some guy. Nice work with perspective.

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  6. *sigh* There are some men who can look that good in scrubs. But it sounds like he hasn't had the best day.

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  7. Love how you described his face in the last line

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  8. Terrific six! Love the description. Patricia Preston.

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  9. Thanks everyone! You'll find out more about Nick, don't worry! ;)

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  10. Nick sounds delicious ;) Also, yay for pale people! We need love too!

    Great six, Roberta. This is shaping into a very interesting story!

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