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Sunday, May 1, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Nine

Continuing in RESET.

Last week, we left Lewis Hunter speculating who the third steak was for.

Outside the shop, a car's horn sounded and we both turned, instinctively orienting ourselves to the obnoxious sound.

As soon as I saw the Porsche parked in front of the shop, my eyes bugged. “Nice car.”

“It's not mine,” she clarified, too quickly. 

Boyfriend’s car. The brown paper tore a little under my hand.

“You're not Melvin Hunter, are you?” she blurted next.

I managed a smile. "No."

Her mouth thinned, lips pressed together in frustration.
 
As always, check out the other fabulous Sixes from a wealth of pubbed and non-pubbed authors alike - linked HERE.
 
If you want to read back to the beginning of this scene between Lilly Young and Lewis Hunter, click HERE.
 
Happy Reading!

19 comments:

  1. I like the way you bring out Lewis's personality as he has his internal thoughts. Intriguing six.

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  2. nice 6! Things are gonna spark now!

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  3. I like watching this slow build.

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  4. all righty!! lots of questions !!

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  5. I'm with the others, so very many questions!

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  6. Great six. First blog that I've visited this morning from sss that I'm adding to my google reader. Looking good!

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  7. Nicely done! Now I'm full of questions!

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  8. Ditto on the questions. What does she really know that she's hiding?????

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  9. You're really building quite a dramatic story, full of secrets, and yet the tone is so light. Love it.

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  10. Nice 6. Now can we get the sparks flying between those two

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  11. I want to know what she's hiding. Good work!

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  12. I'm liking it so far! Want to read more.

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  13. Thanks to all again for stopping by - questions will just keep on building :) *Maybe*, when I switch POVs, you'll begin to make some guesses!

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  14. Can you add an RSS link to your blog? I want to add you to my igoogle daily reader.
    Thx.
    k

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  15. Um, tech challenged here...How do I add an RSS link? I used a gadget from Blogger but all it did was list my last 5 posts on the right hand margin...??? Removed it, because I thought it was sorta redundant?

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  16. Sounds like threads of tension on both sides - I like how you're stringing that out.
    And you want to add the 'Subscription Links' gadget to your blog, not the one listed as RSS feed. Hope that helps.

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