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Sunday, April 3, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Five

Taking off (almost) from last week's snippet from RESET.


Half human Lewis Hunter is serving Lilly in the butcher shop where he works, trying to remain anonymous, hoping she doesn't remember him. She is scrutinizing him, trying to place him...


Possible Lewis Hunter? (I had Alex Pettyfer in my mind, but seems like he's going to be overly used LOL) Image source


“Are you okay?” It was something a concerned stranger might ask. “You don't look so good."


I was good at lying, after so much practice.


She pulled off her woolen hat. Her glorious chestnut hair spilled forward as she put her head between her knees.


"It’s okay,” she said, voice shaking. “It’ll pass in a minute.”


To be continued...


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14 comments:

  1. Intriguing. And the dude in the picture is simply adorable!

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  2. I like this story and the guy in the photo is a cutie!

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  3. Thanks! And thanks to Abercrombie and Fitch for the inspiration :)

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  4. Super cute picture. Great six. I love the hat and hair details.

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  5. Great six! So does she recognize him?

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  6. nice six. Is she sick from being in a butcher shop?

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  7. Nice details, I can almost feel as queasy as she must.

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  8. Ohh! <3 I want to know what comes next!!!!

    And picture boy is quite a cutie. there are A&F Billboards around here that have nearly made me wreck on the interstate before...

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  9. Oh very nice - makes me want to read on! Great job. I wonder what the other half of him is (the non human part) - and why she is dizzy...

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  10. Interesting. I want to know more about them both...

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  11. A lot said in those lines! I agree-love the hair description and I agree about the cutie in the image!

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  12. I can't wait till next Sunday to read more.
    - Aaron

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