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Sunday, April 24, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Eight

Last week, we left Lewis wondering if perhaps Lilly does remember...Something...

I'm at a dog trial this weekend  (see the "Me" tab on this blog to find out what that's all about!) so won't be able to comment on all the other great authors' Six Sentences until Monday. 

You should head over to the Six Sentence Sunday site to see who's taking part this week.  Or why not participate yourself?  Sign up from Tuesday pm, post your six from any WIP or finished piece before 9 a.m. on the following Sunday and voila, you're part of the fun SSS family!

I turned away. “Should I wrap those filets for you?”
“Um. Sure.” 
“How many?” 
“Three.” 
Three. One of her parent’s friends? Or a boyfriend? I wrapped the steaks. My hands were clumsy, fingers sticking to the tape.
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19 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 24, 2011 at 5:10 AM

    I like that she's wondering who the 3rd steak is for! Very interesting!

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  2. Rebecca RoyceApril 24, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Ooh, she really doesn't know!!

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  3. Sandra SookooApril 24, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    very nice!

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  4. Gem SivadApril 24, 2011 at 9:55 AM

    Very teasing dialog. Hope I get more next week. Great six. Happy Easter!

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  5. Lisa FoxApril 24, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    Hmm, who is that steak for? Greta six!

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  6. AnonymousApril 24, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    his clammy hands gave it away lol

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  7. Cate MastersApril 24, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Excellent teaser. Who is that extra steak for, indeed?

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  8. Sarah GrimmApril 24, 2011 at 3:41 PM

    Great snippet! Who is the steak for? Looking forward to reading more.

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  9. Catch My WordsApril 24, 2011 at 4:53 PM

    As long as they get the fingers unstuck from the tape by the time they cook the steaks, all should be cool.

    Joyce
    http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

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  10. Jessica KnaussApril 24, 2011 at 4:57 PM

    Oh, man, every week, just a little more... When do we get to find out?

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  11. LindsayApril 24, 2011 at 5:21 PM

    Stop with the teasing and give us the whole story. This six a week is a killer

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  12. Susanna FraserApril 24, 2011 at 6:48 PM

    Lovely six--this story continues to intrigue.

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  13. AllureVanSanzApril 24, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    Great imagery.

    Well done!

    All my best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  14. Liana BrooksApril 24, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    Now I'm very curious. Good work!

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  15. Monica Enderle PierceApril 25, 2011 at 12:28 AM

    I love the simplicity of this. Little written, but a lot said. Nice!

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  16. Roberta WalkerApril 26, 2011 at 9:31 AM

    Thanks everyone! I do hope this beast gets out there someday, otherwise, it'll take years to read six sentences at a time :)

    I have one teeny little scene to write to finish the draft, but it's eluding me like the sun in April. Sooooo hard to get to the end!

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  17. Jayel KayeApril 26, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    Great teaser. Wel done.

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  18. UnknownApril 26, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    It sounds pretty interesting. The first six you use are interesting. Is that from your book?

    Draven Ames

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  19. Roberta WalkerApril 30, 2011 at 6:30 AM

    Thanks Jayel! Draven, yes, from RESET my first (and only :) completed work, now in revision AGAIN LOL.

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