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Sunday, March 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Episode Four


This is too much fun!

This snippet is also from RESET.

Last week, we left off with the enigmatic, half human Lewis Hunter experiencing a flashback when he goes to serve a customer in the butcher shop where he works.

“This would make great filets,” I said, pointing to an expensive piece of tenderloin.

She was looking at me - scrutinizing me, a crease deepening between her lovely blue-gray eyes.

I pulled my ball cap further down. She doesn’t know me. She cannot know me.

“Do I…?” Her hand gripped the counter.

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Happy reading!

16 comments:

  1. interesting! What happens next? :-)

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  2. Uh-oh. I think she knows! I want to know what happens next!

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  3. Oh, love this! You really showed his anxiety through his thoughts. I wonder why he's so afraid of being recognized? What a great hook.

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  4. Uh-oh, I sense trouble brewing. Great six! I can't wait to read more.

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  5. Sounds like trouble is ahead! Great snippet, Roberta

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  6. Ooh great stuff! Why doesn't he want her to know him? Loved your six!

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  7. Oh I love that..."she cannot know me." Definitely a hooktacular six!

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  8. I like how you put so much tension into what on the surface is an ordinary interaction.

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  9. Uh oh! Looks like his cover is blown!

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  10. Wow! Does she know him? Great job pulling us in.

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  11. I think she knows him...now why is he so worried about that?

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  12. Ooh? A woman from the past? That he doesn't want to recognise him? Intriguing!

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  13. So which of them is wrong?! EEk!

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  14. Thanks everyone. It's a hoot to read all the SSS entries. I am entertained and educated every Sunday (or in this case - Monday).

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